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Lying under the sky by ~xXxKyubixXx:iconxXxKyubixXx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


Looking at the night sky,

Lying next to you,

Wishing on shooting stars,

Hopping my wish well come true,

I turn & look over to you,

You’ve closed your eyes,

You’ve put arms around me,

Holding me close to close,

I push your hair back behind your ear,

Putting my hand against your face,

Thinking to myself,

How is it a girl like you,

Is with a guy like me,

I place my head against your,

& I close my eyes,

Holding you close to me,

Never wanting to let go of you,

As I fall asleep in your arm,

Still wishing on the shooting stars,

For this time together,

To never end.
©2009 ~xXxKyubixXx
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I know its not very good but oh well

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~kilian777 Jul 4, 2009, 1:58:09 PM
very...done before Brado.

--
Life is like a dying clown, it can be loud and mean and

funny and sad and lovely and at times even beautiful,

but as much as it is, it'll still die with a quiet breath.

Make your Clown matter, make it special, before it's

horn is honked for good!
:iconkilian777:
~kilian777 Jul 4, 2009, 2:00:17 PM
[link]=PlayList&;p=20F217F1ADB1D01E&index=34&;playnext=19&;playnext_from=PL

--
Life is like a dying clown, it can be loud and mean and

funny and sad and lovely and at times even beautiful,

but as much as it is, it'll still die with a quiet breath.

Make your Clown matter, make it special, before it's

horn is honked for good!
:iconkilian777:
~kilian777 Jul 5, 2009, 10:15:20 AM
Not a compliment. I meant it was unoriginal.

--
Life is like a dying clown, it can be loud and mean and

funny and sad and lovely and at times even beautiful,

but as much as it is, it'll still die with a quiet breath.

Make your Clown matter, make it special, before it's

horn is honked for good!
:iconxxxkyubixxx:
~xXxKyubixXx Jul 5, 2009, 10:37:59 AM
-_- your an asshat I hope you know that
:iconkilian777:
~kilian777 Jul 5, 2009, 11:31:52 AM
yup.

--
Life is like a dying clown, it can be loud and mean and

funny and sad and lovely and at times even beautiful,

but as much as it is, it'll still die with a quiet breath.

Make your Clown matter, make it special, before it's

horn is honked for good!
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